Spelling mistakes and typos
" Looks like embroided is a common misspelling of embroidered, i.e. something which was made with embroidery. Will change. " As desohpos and caaaps said, espirit is a common misspelling of the originally French esprit, pronounced "eh-spree", which means "morale". I'm not entirely sure this was the intended meaning, but looking at the names of the other monsters in that area, it seems more likely than just spirit. I'll change it, at least for now. " The full flavour text is: " The noun being crushed is actually a noun phrase: "those who dare challenge you." "to delight in" means to take delight from something. So "the court maidens delight in X", where X is another, larger, noun phrase: "seeing you crush those who dare challenge you" Code warrior
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The description of Lightning Warp skill mentions lighting damage.
Unless you're kicking over a lamp, it's probably missing an N. :) | |
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" Yeah, I understand now what you mean. I originally thought, assuming delight is being used as a noun, it was supposed to mean that the court maidens are so delighted in seeing you (because you are 20% taller than everybody) that your rivals are mentally crushed. Because the maidens cheer for you, not them. Well and in that case it would have had to be "crushes", I believe. Disregard witches, aquire currency. Last edited by dust7 on Feb 15, 2012, 8:03:45 PM
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" Oh lol, I get you now. In that case, yes, it would indeed be crushes, however you would also need an apostrophe in maidens, to make it possessive: maidens' delight. Code warrior
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Suggestion :
"Quest completed" instead of "quest complete" At the map of the world with a completed quest description Cheers :) Current exiles under command :
Snoop Lv 73 cold witch Normal Razagaal Lv 63 Fire summoner witch legacy Daggoth Lv 50 AoF summoner Templar legacy | |
" I'd say, its equal in grammar. invited by timer @ 10.12.2011
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There's an item prefix named "Thorney" that should be "Thorny" and a sword type called "Doppleganger" that should be "Doppelganger".
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There's a passive named "Purity of Essense" -- should be "Purity of Essence".
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" " Fixed Thorny and Essence, but the sword is actually Dopplehander, not doppelganger. Quest Complete vs. Quest Completed? Both seem perfectly good to me. I'll just leave it as it is. Code warrior
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